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First try at my tablet

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..AAAANDDDDD..I FAILED. :dummy:
Oh well, practice time. :I
please critique me, I want to learn to improve, not fail DX
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:star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

I'll give my idea on this. I do say, that for a first attempt on a tablet, this turned out pretty good and pretty ^-^ I can easily see what you wanted to do. But i have also seen many cats in this pose (since i often look up cats since they're my weakness <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/x/x…" width="15" height="15" alt=":XD:" title="XD"/>) so unfortunately i have to strike down some on originality. Your way of doing this, is somewhat the same way i do it (our lines and handwriting make us cringe <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/m/m…" width="15" height="15" alt=":meow:" title="Meow :3"/> I like the fluffyness in this kitten too. The tail and rumo, though, i feel as if there's too much area from where the tail begins. Unless the tail is that fluffy at the base and shouldn't start near the bottom. Overall, yes this is a very good drawing for a first time on a tablet, and without using a traditional version as the template (that's how i started XD i'd do them on paper then scan them to the PC) I do say that you do need some more practice, but keep it up! =^-^=